Saturday, July 28, 2007



"CHECK, CHECK!"

Nif and I finished our memoirs today! Turns out it was oh, so simple! We were making it WAY too complicated with all the dialogue, "putting it on the body", bringing nature into it, blah, blah, blah! I've boiled my memoir into one word, because I am just that efficient. Jennifer, of course, is more verbose (and competitive - I'M not, that's what makes me "better"), hers goes on and on a bit more. Nonetheless, here it is. Tada!


MEMOIR

by Carrie

love.


So, what do you think? Did I say all that needs to be said? I could take out "by"!

10 comments:

Bossy Boots said...

I laughed, I cried, I was with you the whole way, it was a great transferance from my own ego state to the collective state of being, a launch into my own collective concepts and then a regathering within to form. There was drama, romance, heartbreak and oh so much more. I'm going back to read it again!

I said it first, by the way, Brilliant.

Michelle O'Neil said...

Love the pics of the sisters.

Loved your memoir.

Are you going to write a second one?

holly said...

yes, brilliant! Read it over and over in a single moment. You have take minimalism to new heights!

And, I agree, the "by" is just WAY too much. I say cut it! It states the obvious, and who needs that?

kario said...

You snot! You totally had me going for a second. I thought you really had finished it and I was terrifically impressed. Glad to see your sense of humor is with you in Sisters.

Jess said...

Congrats. Brilliant. And most of all, nice picture!!

Anonymous said...

nif?

Ziji Wangmo said...

If it was only so easy.

Love your writing.

Please send Michelle and me the sequel!

Suzy said...

I saw the movie.

grammer said...

You don't really need to put your name on it. Everyone will know it's you. xo t

Kim said...

Okay, I was going to try to be funny, but there is no possible way to follow Suzy's comment. F-in hilarious!